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      still need to work on that grammar, dakota.
      made some minor changes.
      and jesus christ learn the difference between your and you're.

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      Lol I know the differiece its just the iPad corrects things sometimes that doesn't really help.

      That's why I haven't fixed the other one.

      I will fix it asap no-name.

      I was always a dreamer, in childhood especially. People thought I was a little strange.-Charley pride

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      And thanks for fixing the stuff, and looking over my wiki post.

      I was always a dreamer, in childhood especially. People thought I was a little strange.-Charley pride

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      The iPad doesn't make mistakes with your and you're. And when writing an article in notes for the love of god delete the asterisks when you post it.

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      You seriously need to work on your grammar. I have spotted 3 or 4 mistakes in the first few sentences.


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