An Impromptu Verse or Two

[ElijahJones]

Softly thinking, I see your outline in the sand The waves wash over you, as I reach out my hand To meet someone so much like me, In strength, desire, audacity I think of what might be from afar If for only one moment we could forget who we are

[Mystical_Journey]

Is this for everyone to think of a impromptu Verse or Two? (i would like to join in if it is ) I like your style of writing that picture at the bottom looks like Johnathan Davis

[ElijahJones]

That would be great if others also put some verse here. Go for it.

[ElijahJones]

Beneath ivory towers, foundations deep Memories of hidden angst did creep Forever moaning, lusting, groaning Hoping one day to rule the world From exalted peeks, daylight sleeps But night has found a home Accepting eyes that ignore the truth May noble causes be not in vain And comely brides forever joy In lovely touches and lustful boys To be renounced of pride and hate Til' all the world accept its fate Trodden down by foot of man In ignorance of simple plans

[OpheliaBlue]

I really like the first one EJ....it reminds me of something I'm going through. I'll have to read the second one later, when I don't have so many people up my butt. =/

[irishcream]

nah Ob..i like the first one...much more poignant! hmm...i'm not good at impromptu... lemme think about it! ah, i know...this isn't gonna be brilliant! Standing on the edge Of something she doesn't understand, she waits for a sign. which way to turn? Forward is the unknown, safety is back behind her. But what does she want? The dark mystery of a new sensation, or the safety of what she knows already? It's pull is stronger than she, she holds out her arms, and steps off the edge, and finds wings to fly. Okay, so it has no title, and i think it's rather nonsensical..only i understand it.

[ElijahJones]

I love your signature picture Irishcream. Ok....extemp... Daring visions of mortal men and elfish women Sparing the pain of secrets told Of anxieties vague and old Planted by religious deceit To keep us bound hands and feet But all freedom comes with a price Mixed with tears in Irish glenns When merry lovers dance among the ferns

[irishcream]

hey, i like that! it puts me in mind of the tale of Aragorn and Arwen in The Lord of the Rings...he was mortal, she was an elf...such a sad tale...

[voidofform]

distance is the saviour the safe glorious emptiness soul slowly draining will disappear anyday now. closeness is the saviour the warm glowing fire but each cut takes a piece the end is the same

[ElijahJones]

Nice voidofform!

[voidofform]

another: ---------- lies truth what difference does it make and why do you care? trust me trust you with piece of my security why should i risk anything? piece of you piece of me you had more than enough i've given all i'm willing to. proof of concept proof of authenticity given the evidence no wonder you're suspicious my self my soul is not your soul walk away there's no point here bemused confused i have to wonder why do you care?

[ElijahJones]

deep calls to deep scars to scars emptiness to emptiness each alone in the dark but together in existence makes lonely loneliness in the endless black a secret is told that souls can touch and be reborn

[ElijahJones]

patiently quietly study my mind defiantly quietly embedded in time little oblivion triumph of laughter the hangman does smile despite his demise add numbers to be multiplied countries to be divided who shall bare witness to a woman so chided exuberant in youth bitter in mothering a world of lost children rush to the smothering do feel and do see what has been lost by the free when taken by fear they do hide every tear