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      sadness

      why are we here? what is life. this sick game we call

      existance. who asked for any of this. who can change it. the

      days grow darker, ever so slightly. pain and anxiety, how you

      fill my heart. thoughts of death and sadness, overbearing.

      will this pain ever leave me? is there someone out there.

      someone to help me? will there be an end? time is but an

      object of renewal. it moves forward, but does anything else

      really? is there a reason for breathing. a reason for

      prolonging the day? why wont you save me. why wont you be

      true to yourself? there is too much death and destruction. it

      is overpowering. why wont it stop. will it ever stop? years

      of joy are long since passed. how i wish i could see you

      again. how you made life worth living. joy is no longer in my

      heart. sadness.... will it ever leave? will i be safe or will

      i die. god please save me from myself


      there is too much pain and suffering, and this is just me.

      the world is wicked and there is no escape. why is there

      hatred? why is there a need to kill. will there ever be

      peace? not while our hearts are evil. no one will ever live

      forever. this greed will end our lives swiftly. is the day of

      judgement at hand? will there be an ultimate punishment for

      our sins? to find out would mean its too late. reality is

      pain and suffering to the tenth degree. judgment is even

      more.....god, why will you let this happen? do we not mean

      more to you? do you not love me? when will it be too late.

      when will time stand still. when will you save me from me.......
      420/24/7/365 herb?

      <div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(mayhembrown)</div>
      i tried to fly but cudnt, so i went outside in the garden but still cudnt.. i then thought lets go and find a girl!

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      what is this crap

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      what is....Life. A desription of the harder times. could be written better. But as it is, it is yours. Your creation to explain to us a a darkened memo shadowing your mind. How could it be descibed as "crap"? Snowman, do not post worthless energy. Jay Dawg, don't let posts like his discourage you.


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      Originally posted by snowman
      what is this crap
      I liked his poem, so if you could please just keep your negative comments to yourself!
      Great poem, jay dawg! Really!

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      Meh, it's a little lengthy, and odd how it's written, kind of in a story format. I think there's quite a few poems that are just written when someone was having a bad day, and thus they are solely focused on everything being terrible / depression / etc.

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      Originally posted by Vampyre
      Meh, it's a little lengthy, and odd how it's written, kind of in a story format. I think there's quite a few poems that are just written when someone was having a bad day, and thus they are solely focused on everything being terrible / depression / etc.

      very observant
      420/24/7/365 herb?

      <div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(mayhembrown)</div>
      i tried to fly but cudnt, so i went outside in the garden but still cudnt.. i then thought lets go and find a girl!

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      jay dawg.. I liked your poem as it asked questions that I myself have asked.

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