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      2 Poems.

      Leaves drip with rain-water onto the moist ground,
      The grass was as wet as water itself,
      Another round of rain had began to drizzle,
      Soon enough, thunder broke out upon the quiet town,
      Windows shut, doors blocked, blinds closed,
      Panic roamed the city in search of destruction,
      Bolts of lightning stormed down, with mighty power,
      Damage was done, people had died, buildings destroyed,
      Birds as large as crows stopped in mid-flight,
      The citizens stopped everything for such a sight,
      For the storm was now over,
      The birds flew much lower,
      The trees shook off the water in the wind,
      The message was clear to them all,
      The next time something was at an end,
      It hadn't even began at all...
      -
      A drop of water began the end,
      A lightning bolt came upon us,
      Thunder shook the earth,
      Tornados searched through the city,
      The world was in a panic,
      From the Pacific to the Atlantic,
      Earthquakes appearing everywhere,
      No seemed to care,
      Water started to flood,
      Turning into blood,
      Windows shattered, houses collapsed,
      All the time had lasped,
      The sun tried to show,
      The water began to flow,
      The clouds disapperaed from the sky,
      No one would ever die...
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      I guess they don't make 2 much sense. They're both about storms

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      cool poems man

      the second one reminds me of a dream I had once actually

      one word correction in the last line of the first poem: "It hadn't even began at all..." should be: "It hadn't even begun at all..."

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      The second one reminds me of the boxing day tsunami...
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'

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