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      Virus

      There's an evil virus that's threatening mankind
      It's not state of the art, it's a serious state of the mind
      The muggers, the backstabbers, the two faced elite
      A menace to society, a social disease
      To brainwash the mind is a social disorder
      The cynics, the apathy one-upmanship order
      Watching beginnings of social decay
      Gloating and sneering at life's disarray
      Eating away at your own self esteem
      Pouncing on every word that you might be saying
      To attack someones mind is a social disorder
      The constitution, the government, martial law order
      Superficially smiling a shake of the hand
      As soon as your back is turned treason is planned
      When every good thing's laid to rest
      By the governments hate, by the constitution and their lies
      And every time you think you're safe
      And when you go to turn away
      You know they're sharpening all their knives
      All in your mind
      All in your head
      Try to relate it
      All in your mind
      All in your head
      Try to escape it
      Without a conscience they destroy
      And that's a thing that they enjoy
      They're a sickness that's in all of our minds
      They want to sink the ship and leave
      The way they laugh at you and me
      You know it happens all the time
      But it only happens in your mind
      The rats in the cellar you know who you are...
      Or do you?
      Watching beginnings of social decay...

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      Bravo....

      I liked it very much....

      The topic is very well developed and the rhyming scheme, most if the time, is perfect. I truly enjoyed it greatly...
      If I hadn't made me
      I'd be more inclined to bow
      Powers that be would have swallowed me up
      But that's more than I can allow...

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      thats an awsome poem or lyrical piece of work you got there.....automatucally i fell in rythem when i read it....excellent work ey


      the first 2 lines are really attention grabbing.....is this lyrics for rap or something?
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