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      Valentines Day

      Valentines Day

      Grip her lovingly between your fingers,
      Do not let her slip through the gaps,
      Hold her as close as you can, as often as possible,
      But keep your grip on her,
      Don’t let her slip,
      Away, Away.

      Death has come to take her away,
      Hold her closer, she’s fading,
      Her life energy is fading as you crumble,
      With pain, with grief, with love.

      Down, Down she’s slipping from your grasp,
      And your life.
      She’s covered in her own blood,
      Her body limp,
      She barely has enough strength to clasp your hand,
      One last time, and pull your head closer,
      For that one last kiss.

      But her body slumps lifeless,
      Moments before your lips make contact,
      Never to be had.
      She’s been taken,
      From you, from your life, from her dreams.

      Think of the time you wasted,
      When you took her for granted.
      Apart, Apart,
      Now you’ll never be together.
      Happy Valentines Day.
      Broken shards of a shattered dream,
      Thrown against the wall of time,
      We all end up in pieces.

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      That's good, but shocking...very, very sad...
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'

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      That is so sad. It's a good poem, but tragic. The thought of this fate befalling my fiance just makes me want to break down. I don't know what I would do, or if I would even have the will to live. But, this is what makes it a good poem. Cherish who you have and love.
      Shine on, you crazy diamond!

      Raised: The Blue Meanie, Exobyte

      Adopted: MarcusoftheNight

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