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      Night & Day

      Was that a lick of sunshine
      That crossed my bedroom floor?
      Just that little taste
      Will have me wanting more.

      Open wide the window-shade,
      And let the brightness in.
      Let me watch it spread across
      The floor; the bed; my skin.

      Shine on, celestial morning
      As I crawl into your light.
      Take, dispel the darkness
      That enveloped me last night.

      As shadows slink back into shade
      And hide inside the walls,
      I'll dance across the daytime sky
      Until the evening calls--

      When today is over,
      And nighttime comes once more,
      I'll again embrace the moonlight
      As it glides across my floor.
      We break the
      ceiling and grin and gasp
      and redefine life
      for the ones who
      have merely lived it.

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      That was really enjoyable to read. Very well written and colorful. One of the best that I've read in a while. Although it's not quite my style, it made think of tomorrow as a better day. thanks.


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      Thank you, frozen. I like it when people can walk away feeling something because of what I've written.
      We break the
      ceiling and grin and gasp
      and redefine life
      for the ones who
      have merely lived it.

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