Ok it's my first composition on guitar PLEASE bear in mind I've only been playing guitar for 10 days. So it's really simple and my playing is still all over the place. But I just wanted to play around and tell a little story. Constructive criticisms welcome!!

Around the Square.mp3


lyrics:

My baby woke up to the sound of this song
I climbed into his room and told him nothing was wrong, “Nothing’s wrong. Go back to sleep baby, nothing’s wrong.”
We still belong
Like the birthday song
But for just how long, how longity longity long?

I love you but you don’t
And I love you but you won’t

Then we woke up my baby again, don’t you know?
First a call and then a ball and then another call and then a throw
I said “No”
He said “Go”
And I said “no no no no no no no no no no no no no no”

I love you but you don’t
And I love you but you won’t

I woke up to the sound of my baby cry
He just needed a drink, and so did I, ohhhhh so did I
But it’s ok, kuz we’re still here
Though he’s disappeared
And it’s as I feared as he feared as I feared as he feared

That I love you but you don’t
And I love you but you won’t