Very nice. It's refreshing to hear poems that don't rhyme once in awhile. A lot of my favorite song lyrics don't rhyme but sound perfect. |
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Hey, guys. As you might know already, I am an aspiring writer. I thought since I have nothing else better to do today, I should post one of my poems! If you had some serious criticism, I would love to hear it! Here it is.. |
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Shine on, you crazy diamond!
Raised: The Blue Meanie, Exobyte
Adopted: MarcusoftheNight
Very nice. It's refreshing to hear poems that don't rhyme once in awhile. A lot of my favorite song lyrics don't rhyme but sound perfect. |
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Thank you, Burns. I don't really like a lot of the poems that rhyme. I think it restricts you too much in your choice of words....I don't like being restriced that way. |
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Shine on, you crazy diamond!
Raised: The Blue Meanie, Exobyte
Adopted: MarcusoftheNight
I really enjoyed reading that. It reminded me of Sylvia Plath's style of writing poems...without the depression factor of course. |
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"dreaming permits each and everyone of us to be
quietly and safely insane every night of our lives."
-William Dement
Thank you, Starlite. I really appreciate that. |
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Shine on, you crazy diamond!
Raised: The Blue Meanie, Exobyte
Adopted: MarcusoftheNight
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Shine on, you crazy diamond!
Raised: The Blue Meanie, Exobyte
Adopted: MarcusoftheNight
Wow, thats refreshing. |
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Aww, thanks guys! |
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Shine on, you crazy diamond!
Raised: The Blue Meanie, Exobyte
Adopted: MarcusoftheNight
Nice poem. |
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“What a peculiar privilege has this little agitation of the brain which we call 'thought'” -Hume
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Shine on, you crazy diamond!
Raised: The Blue Meanie, Exobyte
Adopted: MarcusoftheNight
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Thanks . If you want to make a song out of it, you can go right ahead, Ophie. I don't mind if you change the poem arond a bit...I love your beautiful voice. |
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Shine on, you crazy diamond!
Raised: The Blue Meanie, Exobyte
Adopted: MarcusoftheNight
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