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      My first attempt

      Ok, I just made this up off the top of my head.My first attempt at being poetic.
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      Nothing

      I look around, I see nothing
      I walk forward, standing on nothing
      I try to touch,I feel nothing
      This world is nothing

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      don't laugh please..
      You guys suck.

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      just kidding. i liked it.
      clear eyes. strong hands.

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      you liked it?Holy shit I didn't think I would get a positive response, Considering I had made that up about 2 mins. before I posted it.
      thx adidas.
      You guys suck.

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      LOL!!!

      Just like your head,
      full of, nothing...



      I like it. But what are you walking 'upon'?

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      how is that? I changed it.
      You guys suck.

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      Better.

      You're missing a comma though... Or is it supposed to be like that?

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