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      "Night Fall" yet another poem of mine...

      Night Fall

      Evening slipped beyond the hills.
      The stars invaded the clear blue sky.
      The sounds of the coming night were filled.
      The mice did scurry, screech owl cry.

      The deer dashed as the stars sparked.
      In awhile the fox would come near.
      Now he waits as bugles harked.
      While the shadows disappear.

      Many days come quick then go.
      With the bright sun beating down.
      Yet, night is king and it will show-
      The moon disserves the crown.

      And all was calm in the night.
      Many chatter, scurry and skit.
      Still the darkness eased in spite.
      While they live they will not quit.

      Life comes to be by the forest edge.
      The battles still wage on.
      In the shrubs and past the hedge.
      It lingers, lonely, like the faun.

      The day is dull as the animals know.
      And the wind is always right.
      In the day it doesn't blow-
      As nice as in the night.
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      The dream is real, my friends. The failure to realize it is the only unreality.
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      Sweet poem, it brings my mind to the forest!!
      What was your inspiration to write it?

      lol, as i got to the last paragraph my attention was drawn to your sig......veeerryyy nice!!!
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      haha yah, i can see how that would be a distraction...

      Thanks for the compliments, I am not sure what inspired me to write this poem really because it was written over a year ago, but I have always been a night owl so my love for the night time probably sparked this poem.
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      write another one in this post..........ill tell you wat its like

      a night one revolving around a forest would be sweet....ggrr now

      jks mate, catchya

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      Great imagery! I love the line about the wind blowing more nicely at night !
      " my dreams they aren't as empty as my conscience seems to be"


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