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      Hey, man. You're getting there.
      I like the way pinball wizard sounds. If you could just get the picking to be a little more steady, around the middle section, it'd sound great.

      Check the pitch on part of the Comfortably Numb solo. A lot of it sounds good, but there are definitely a few parts where it seems you're either a note too high or low.

      I really like the Wish You Were Here solo.
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      Starting off, eh? Not bad, but definately could use some improvement. All you need to do is work on some of your timing, but this mostly refers to Pinball Wizard. Like O said, get your picking steady and it'll be fine.

      One thing I can't stress enough, and this goes for everybody, is to take your time when trying to learn something. Never expect to jump into a song and learn it perfectly right away... start it slow, then keep building up until it's coherent.

      Not bad.



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      Sounds like your guitar's out of tune. And there was also a number of times in those songs that you're supposed to bend, and you didn't. So it sounded kinda awkward.

      How long have you been playing?

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      I really hated the way these turned out. They sound okay normally, I might just use a microphone. It'd sound better.
      Actually, I'll do it now. It should sound better.

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      To answer Vampyre's question, I've been playing on-and-off for about 5 years. (O_o)

      Anyway, I recorded some using a microphone taped near the bridge, and it sounds a lot better methinks, especially Pinball Wizard and Wish You Were Here. "Odds N' Sods" isn't the Who song, it's a bunch of random crap I can play that aren't whole solos or whatever.

      Odds N' Sods
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