Here's a song I made up - vocals and guitar are all by me. It's still a work in progress, but tell me what you think.

Start soon, quick yet slow,
Let hopes die and solemn flow,
Regain a life once lived yet lost,
Or risk all and face the cost.

Why me, us, you, them?
We jumped the gun, start a trend;
Connection severed, asphalt wall,
A giant barrier between us all.

A coagulation, fragmentation,
Hidden meaning of a congregation,
Fucking penetration, no creation,
Zero temptation and all frustration.

Empty words lead cratered lies,
Break these chains and rip the ties;
Into darkness, tome of sin,
Trades are tricks as tricks are thin.

Worlds apart as it seems,
Reality goes, splits and screams;
Fade it out, drown the NOISE,
Place it all and leap for joy.

To palpitate and desecrate,
Kill, smoke, stab, but no debate;
Sedate, and then recriminate,
Can't procreate, so spread the hate.

Here's the recorded song. Quality is decent - tell me what you think.

And I know, I know, my voice isn't perfect - but it's improving.