Pure Joy;)

[ugne]

..walking barefoot on the grass.. ..sitting mindless in the dawn.. ..waching stars..drinking tea ..what a great thing is simply be")P thats not very smart..but who cares") [attachmentid=380] thats pure joy too")

[Howie]

..walking barefoot on the grass.. ..sitting mindless in the dawn.. ..waching stars..drinking tea ..what a great thing is simply be")P thats not very smart..but who cares") [attachmentid=380] thats pure joy too")[/b] There is no standard of IQ to make it cool. It is simple and quite fulfilling. Silence, quite. A quite mind can be disturbed by a thought like a candle can be blown out by a breeze.

[ugne]

There is no standard of IQ to make it cool. It is simple and quite fulfilling. Silence, quite. A quite mind can be disturbed by a thought like a candle can be blown out by a breeze. [/b] ")

[Gwendolyn]

Pretty darn nice, there.

[dodobird]

..walking barefoot on the grass.. ..sitting mindless in the dawn.. ..waching stars..drinking tea ..what a great thing is simply be")P thats not very smart..but who cares") [/b] I like it a lot, but how about change the last line to: ..what a great thing is it to be because that would go smoother if you sing it, and I think your words are about "simply being", so there is no need to actualy add "simply" because the rest of the words say that already just an idea, i could be completly wrong

[ugne]

I like it a lot, but how about change the last line to: ..what a great thing is it to be because that would go smoother if you sing it, and I think your words are about "simply being", so there is no need to actualy add "simply" because the rest of the words say that already just an idea, i could be completly wrong [/b] thanks") sure please..you can take them"))..its no poetry..just wrote this from my tongue"))