I've been contemplating giving this style of writing a try for some time now, and I finally found enough time to sit down and do it. The basic concept is to make people think about things as a whole, rather than a linear sequence of events. This piece is highly experimental, so the storyline is probably not what you'd call "epic."

"Carl Is Dead"

Any suggestions would be welcome. What do you think? Does this style have an future, or is it just too peculiar?