"carl Is Dead"

**Asymptote** · 03-30-2007 04:59 PM

I've been contemplating giving this style of writing a try for some time now, and I finally found enough time to sit down and do it. The basic concept is to make people think about things as a whole, rather than a linear sequence of events. This piece is highly experimental, so the storyline is probably not what you'd call "epic."

"Carl Is Dead"

Any suggestions would be welcome. What do you think? Does this style have an future, or is it just too peculiar?

**Neruo** · 03-31-2007 08:54 PM

'login in requested"

That ain't gonna work

**wasup** · 03-31-2007 09:14 PM

can't see it

**hyper0105** · 03-31-2007 10:09 PM

I made an account for DV so you all don't have to sign up to view it.

hyper0105(at)hotmail(dot)co(dot)uk (with "@" and "." placed in appropriately)

And the password is dreamviews

And now I get
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**Asymptote** · 04-02-2007 08:07 PM

Oop...sorry about that, everybody! I made the mistake of copying the preview from within my account...

Here's the real link: Carl Is Dead

(Bonus points to anybody who actually reads it after I put you through all that nonsense.)