Poem! Rip into it, be brutally honest.

[Violajoker]

Silicone woman with red, acrylic claws Flashing in ultraviolet sun Has morphed and stretched beyond all of her flaws Her battle with nature is won. Baked at 350 degrees til leathery brown Veneer teeth in a permanent smirk Mustn't muss her hair, so she slouches around Letting others do all the hard work. She confuses popularity with success, Any thoughts she has are fleeting Wonders if she could fit into that dress If she could just break that habit of eating. Now I, with my short, self-cut pink hair Have skin that's paler than most. And no, I guess I don't really care How many purses Ms. Hilton can boast. So I may have been mad when that woman mistook Me for the XY chromosome type, But when I see how real women look, I can take a few "sir"s without gripe.

[Oneironaut Zero]

Awesome. Relevant subject matter - Serious, but with a hint of humor. Wonders if she could fit into that dress If she could just break that habit of eating. ^Best line. Very nice work.

[Merlock]

Most intriguing but style-wise, if you're aiming for rhyming, I'd say it would be better with a feel for harmony in sentence length. That is, the sentences in the verses being built in such a way so that their heard length (not written) is the same. For example: The only thing you'll find around, In fields of black and white, Will hardly ever be profound, With greyness out of sight. The rhyming sentences stretch to the same length when pronounced. More so, they're built in such a way that they flow smoothly in general so it's more of a feel for both speech style, wording and harmony in pronounced length. But aye, what a sad topic it is (in the poem). Modern society...may not be better than the old ages but still not quite where it should be. -.-

[Goldney]

It's really good. I like it a lot.

[CoLd BlooDed]

Besides the syllable thing, good stuff. Liked the satirical concept, it's sad but it's true. Lots of talent on this site!