Thread: Some TPV Poetry

Haha i actually thought it was kinda good (maybe except for that giant word which I threw in because I thought it was cool when I wrote it). I'm not really into most mainstream poetry comparing lives to flowers and stuff but I thought at least maybe some people would like this. I thought it was a good way to explain the start of WWII and I actually like it. Anyway thanks for the input, does anyone else wanna chime in. Feel free to tell me I suck at writing poetry if you think so. This was meant to be more of a funny poem making rhymes about what happened. I have another poem that I had to write for school (for english) so I'll post that when I find it. Also, I think history buffs would appreciate this poem more because they probably understand the chain of events that happened.

Originally Posted by ThePhobiaViewed

Also, I think history buffs would appreciate this poem more because they probably understand the chain of events that happened.

I know a bit about this too. But "He had a fascist buddy who was a meany,
He led Italy and was named Benito Mussolini." isn't exactly skillful commentary. Out of interest, what did the other poems in the class sound like? It seems like a nice assignment.

O all they were all dumb little things. Some kids did funny haikus. Some tried some serious stuff but our teacher was funny so it wasn't for real or anything. I think he just wanted to mix things up a little and get us thinking about the stuff in other ways. BTW it took me like 5 minutes tops to write the poem, it took me longer to decide on a title. I wrote a song today (there are no good songs to learn for guitar to sing along with) and it was pretty good I think, maybe I'll post the lyrics sometime, or record it (although I'm terrible at singing, I hit the right pitches but I just sound bad.