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    1. 09-12-2007 12:18 PM #1
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      Short stories count as art, right?

      Well, partly inspired by some LD experiences, I wrote a short story for children, it’s about ten pages long and called “The Suit of Armour” (that’s the Brit spelling for Armor...).

      It can be downloaded for free here:

      http://www.lulu.com/content/149484

      I hope someone reads it!! :-)

      "And if in our sleep and dreams we perceive, more distinctly than in the day-life, signs of the highest beauty and the purest bliss, - should we not then give them our closest attention?"

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    2. 09-12-2007 01:05 PM #2
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      I've read the first page. Excellent beginning and great writing! I will read the rest when time permist.

      Short stories, essays and other such writing is indeed art!
      On ne voit bien qu'avec le cœur, l'essentiel est invisible pour les yeux.
      --Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

      The temptation to quit will be greatest just before you are about to succeed.
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    3. 09-13-2007 12:37 AM #3
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      I think it's really good, and would make a good illustrated book. There are really a lot of beautiful descriptive passages which could be translated into pictures.

      A good message too, without being preachy at all.
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    4. 09-15-2007 09:49 AM #4
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      Hey, Thanks PJ & Moonbeam! (PJ I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story when you have time - do let me know what you think!). Cheers.

      "And if in our sleep and dreams we perceive, more distinctly than in the day-life, signs of the highest beauty and the purest bliss, - should we not then give them our closest attention?"

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