Thread: Some picture I drew...

The shading and curved lines on the shirt makes the chest look on an angle, though the rest of the body and the breasts are straight and facing forward.

The bum is just a bit too big, and her legs need to be straighter and more relaxed.

With regards to the eye, you might find it difficult when drawing on the nose - if you look at a person, you'll probably notice that their brow extends beyond their eyes.

The arms are too far forward for a standing posture, and it makes it looks as if she slumps.

It's a good picture so far overall, though it can be improved dramatically by using realistic anatomical proportions. I suggest looking at a profile of a person and noting the shadows and features that are prominent in the anatomy, then applying them to your work.

The breasts are just a tad too high up. There needs to be a wee bit more of a slope from the base of the neck to where the line starts to bow out:


(Hope you don't mind the edit too much. Just a very visual person, and wanted to give you an idea.)

The size of her butt is okay, but the way its drawn looks like she's sticking it out and leaning her upper torso forward. Bit awkward of a position. But it doesn't look bad, though.

I don't mind that you draw over my picture. You do what you need to show me what needs to be changed!

Here's an updated picture I did in photoshop. I'm probably going to go back and erase the things I did in photoshop on the actual picture.



Or I might just print off the pen tool outline I used and draw inside that. Pen tool could really help me with the hair.

I've also noticed that the line on near the butt where the pocket is, is wrong. It needs to be more straight going down.

Edit:

Originally Posted by ClouD

The arms are too far forward for a standing posture, and it makes it looks as if she slumps.

can you explain this alittle more or show me what you mean?