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      More Art.... from Anima

      Ok another peice, started over 24 hours ago.


      [Scrapped, Go down]

      Well?

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      Very nice.
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      Shoulders seem a bit too broad, but that's all I have to say for my constructive criticism bit. Overall, good job.

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      you just need to work on your porportions but otherwise its good. her boobs need work(they are sagging and not in the right place), her torso looks odd, she has no hips, and her knees look odd aswell. the area between her hips to the shoulders should be fixed first. i dunno..it just looks odd...

      hope that helps

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      I agree with what nightowl said. You need to work on your proportions and the other stuff, otherwise it's cool.
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      her boobs need work(they are sagging and not in the right place), her torso looks odd, she has no hips, and her knees look odd aswell. the area between her hips to the shoulders should be fixed first.[/b]
      I think NightOwl said most of what I would think should be fixed.

      The area under her left breast looks like it's protruding a bit. The belly button is facing directly at the viewer although she has turned to the left a bit. Her right armpit should be over the shirt unless she is sort of bending backwards. Her eyes seem a bit too close together for the angle. Also, the legs bend outward when normal legs do not unless broken.

      Then again, I'm no anime artist or critic. I'm not really a fan of the style, either.

      So really, the drawing is probably good.

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      nice! but whats wrong with her left eye??
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      Originally posted by dj0s
      nice! but whats wrong with her left eye??
      Ho Ho un-otaku one.

      She is drawn in Anime style and the eyes are MUCH different.

      Left eye, anime. Right eye, closed.

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      lol

      nice....

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      that MUCH better anima. I also see that you used a model based on the erased lines i see. The only thing i see slightly wrong is that her boobs seem to far apart. Also the knee caps and the foot should be facing in one direction together. i think her legs need to be a bit longer, but im not completely sure on that(im not really an artist). I cant really put my finger on whats wrong between the legs and thighs...maybe someone else can point it out

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      Originally posted by nightowl
      . Also the knee caps and the foot should be facing in one direction together
      I can't believe I didn't realize that

      Thanks for pointing that out fro me

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      Also, the neck should be a bit smaller, and the hair should be drawn a solid object (detail lines, colors, and shadows in hair are added after the base object to create the illusion of individual strands). Any details on the face should also start after you're sure what you're doing as well, clothing wise and body detail wise (helps you display different looks and expressions when you have body stance and body expression to guide you). Better job overall though Just keep practicing.

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      I already know about the neck, infact u've been working on it(been a hassle to...) As for the head, i've erased it for now.

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      Originally posted by Anima
      As for the head, i've erased it for now.
      ok but my friend is good at this anime stuff and what she does is make a crash test dummy lookin-thing and then draws over it and then erases it after... i dunno just a thought

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      You mean the outline sketch with the circles and stuff? Yes, I do that also, it's quite helpful.

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