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    1. 08-24-2008 04:29 PM #1
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      Overdrive -poem-

      Knocked out by this world
      Everythings too fast
      Going at high speed
      'We must not come last!'

      Everythings in overdrive
      Everythings too much
      Need to slow down
      Take a breather
      Stop!
      STOP!
      Were losing touch

      Im still working on this poem, so it is not completed.
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    2. 08-25-2008 06:19 AM #2
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      Like it
      When I was in high school I was very ambitious, I wanted to be the Class President but I missed out by only about 3 votes.

      So they made me the Class Secretary of Defence.
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    3. 08-25-2008 11:56 AM #3
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      This is good.
      I hope you make more after your finished with this one.
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    4. 08-31-2008 11:35 AM #4
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      Another poem -about being shy-

      Paralysed

      I see you standing there looking,
      Waiting, waiting for me
      You don't know how much I wanted to respond
      but I couldn't, just couldn't

      You need to understand my pain, you have to realise what i'm like
      I was paralysed, paralsyed
      by being shy

      I see you looking at me
      and it, it pains me to see
      the way you judge me instantly
      the way you stand there impatiently
      You've got to underantand the way I am

      You need to understand my pain, you have to realise what im like
      I was paralysed, paralysed
      by being shy      © Copyright 2008 Emily_Sian (UN: emily_sian at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
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    5. 08-31-2008 11:36 AM #5
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      I might set up a thread just for my poems and other writing on here, not sure.
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    6. 08-31-2008 11:39 AM #6
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      Good stuff, Emily.

      Quote Originally Posted by EmilySian View Post
      I might set up a thread just for my poems and other writing on here, not sure.
      You should.
      http://i.imgur.com/Ke7qCcF.jpg
      (Or see the very best of my journal entries @ dreamwalkerchronicles.blogspot)
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    7. 09-06-2008 03:26 PM #7
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      Quote Originally Posted by EmilySian View Post
      Knocked out by this world
      Everythings too fast
      Going at high speed
      'We must not come last!'

      Everythings in overdrive
      Everythings too much
      Need to slow down
      Take a breather
      Stop!
      STOP!
      Were losing touch
      Until here it wasn't bad at all. For internet-poems, 'wasn't bad' is quite very much good.
      “What a peculiar privilege has this little agitation of the brain which we call 'thought'” -Hume
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