What is a cat, |
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A moose is not a moose, |
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What is a cat, |
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I once saw a cow, |
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care to elaborate... i want some constructive criticism not mindless insults |
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This isn't actually serious poetry, is it? |
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Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
Look out on a summers day,
with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.
alright thanks for the criticism cold blooded, ill keep workin on my writing skills and post some more in the future. |
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It's not necessarily your writing skills, as your grammar, punctuation, spelling, and so forth seem to be in order, it's your grasp of good, original poetry. |
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Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
Look out on a summers day,
with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.
I thought I was just supposed to write a bunch of stuff that rhymed =/ ugh sorry i will try to research more about how to write poems in the meantime, thanks for your help. |
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Good on ya. |
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Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
Look out on a summers day,
with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.
hey guys ive been working on this new poem, hope u like it.... give me some pointers/constructive criticism please. Well, here it is. |
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That last poem is most definitely better than the others, but it still seems to be dominated by the rhymes. |
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Beware of hitchhiking fish
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Beware of hitchhiking fish
Diary of an insomniac.. by marlie |
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lol |
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If I knew Picasso, I would buy myself a gray guitar and play ...
What a big dumby. |
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Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
Look out on a summers day,
with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.
lol |
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hahaha |
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i dont know what you guys are talking about, i wrote that.... its like they say, great minds think alike.... |
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You're not funny at all deary. |
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id like to get a second opinion on that |
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get that ugly guy out of ur sig/avatar plz, its an eye sore |
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