Hello everyone. Just recently I've started to write songs (for the guitar), and I'd like to know what you guys think of my most recent one. Please note that this is the forth song I've ever written, so be nice.

Frangible Reverie

Look outside your window,
And see what I see,
I am the same as you are,
There is nothing we can't be,
What can you see when you feel me?
Am I here or are you dreaming me?

Is this what they call a tangible reality?
It feels more like a frangible reverie,
But when your eyes look into mine,
You've erased all that is lonely inside me

I can't tell how I feel when I see you,
But I think its something they call love,
The thing is I don't even know who you are,
Its your humanity that makes me want to be you,
Its that quality thats so close yet so far

Is this what they call a tangible reality?
It feels more like a frangible reverie
But when your eyes look into mine,
You've erased all that is lonely inside me

It isn't memory that keeps us from getting lost,
Its the mystery that sparks up all thought,
We won't be history but we'll still leave our mark

We will die, but we won't ever cease to be,
We may loose ourselves, but who are we actually?
Our names have never governed reality,
We're all just a part of the this cosmic mystery

Oh is this what they call a tangible reality?
It seems more like a frangible reverie,
But when your eyes look into mine,
You've erased all that is lonely inside me

I haven't decided if its finished yet. What do you guys think? Any suggestions?