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    1. 09-01-2004 02:39 AM #1
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      You're Dear mp3

      http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/opheliab...blue/Songs.html

      You're Dear

      You're dear, you're so dear,
      I get all restless everytime you're near.
      And you cover me like rain till I completely disappear,
      You're dear, so dear, so dear.

      And you're fine, you're so fine,
      You taught me how to love you in a rhyme.
      So I fabricate persistance as your heart spins on a dime,
      You're fine, so fine, so fine.

      ...Why you act so different from the other human beings
      I'll never understand.
      You spin my head like a washing machine,
      You love me like the flick of a rubber band...

      I should run, I should go,
      I've hit the road for less than this before you know.
      But then you kiss me through the screen before I even reach the door,
      So I stay, I don't leave, I don't go.


      a/n: if this sounds songy it's because it's going to be one.
      [b][edit]ok it's a song now...link above[/edit]
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    2. 09-01-2004 02:50 AM #2
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      Ohhhh, I wuv it, especially: "And you're fine, you're so fine,
      You taught me how to love you in a rhyme. "

      But "weirdest" in "You are the weirdest creature that I've ever ever seen" sounds a bit off (just to me)...

      Are you gonna write the music to it? Are you gonna sing it? If you get it recorded, you have to let us here it!


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    3. 09-01-2004 03:51 AM #3
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      Originally posted by Je33ica
      Ohhhh, I wuv it, especially: \"And you're fine, you're so fine,
      You taught me how to love you in a rhyme. \"
      Thanks!

      But \"weirdest\" in \"You are the weirdest creature that I've ever ever seen\" sounds a bit off (just to me)...[/b]
      Hahahahaaaa, I HATE that line, but I was too lazy to think up something better, and I just needed words to fill the rhythm there for the time being. Something better will hit me later on and then I'll edit it. [edited! ]

      Are you gonna write the music to it? Are you gonna sing it? If you get it recorded, you have to let us here it![/b]
      Nope (someone else has composed the music that I'll use), yep, and yep. Thanks, Je33.
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    4. 09-02-2004 02:48 PM #4
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      That is so cool! I can't wait till you write it into a song!
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