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      Two Souls: A Poem

      Warning: Long read because it's supposed to be a story. Is it related to dreams? Could be. It's a prelude to a story about a dream. Let's put it that way.

      Two Souls

      Long ago, the universe suddenly existed
      Because One wished it so.
      And suddenly borne from Him, love came to be
      Consisted between two souls.

      Two souls originally one from One;
      Ray from Light, spark from Lightning
      From One a wish of love ever-lasting
      Two souls fatefully diverged.

      From separate ends of the cosmos
      Magnetically and suitably their cores constituted
      A promise transcends, per millennia
      To each other, inevitably to return

      The forces of good and evil, the long struggle
      Make worlds go round, light and darkness rotate
      Day and night, all who see can experience the juggle
      The unfortunate in eternal night, can barely pulsate.

      Throughout the nettles of war and chaos
      Two souls cross paths, emit a resonance
      Stranger by stranger form
      Regardless cannot disguise familiar essence.

      Each play of story, each wield of the sword
      Transforms the promise into an army
      United battle cries, coordinated battle stances
      Alone defeat the gathering of the enemy

      Every time, at every catch of breath
      Whenever the dread aggregates
      Whenever two restarts at one
      One and one come together, and it is done.

      Eventually, the fighting will have to come to an end
      The determination of hearts ache in remembrance
      Of a shared, distant Memory. These stars illuminate
      The dark skies. Two souls, too, remember and will fight.

      They will fight in order to secure their destiny.

      Conspiring guests of darkness discover a trick
      Attack the thick fiber of Goodness’ might
      Souls collapse under the plight of abysmal shadows
      One by one, they lose sight of starlight.

      Two souls become one.
      For one shadows claim
      For one battle maintains
      In search of the lost beloved

      Ages looking, ages losing faith
      Victory over time grants immunity
      Darkness can no longer spot this one,
      Should this one wish to pass among them

      Corners of the cosmos lay bare with no answer
      Monsters fearfully make way for the powerful
      Entrance and exit of the remaining one
      Who so frantically continues the search

      But to no avail
      Starlight begins to fail
      Heartbeat too painful to carry on anymore
      This one resigns the heart, forevermore.

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      I'm no poetry buff, but it's pretty cool IMO
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      Unless otherwise stated, views expressed in this post are not necessarily representative of the official Dream Views stance. Hell, it's probably not even representative of me.

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      Staring Back At The Dark MelodicRipple's Avatar
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      Thank you Placebo. I'm glad you liked it.

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      I really enjoyed reading this, Melodic. Very cool stuff, and it makes my mind picture some pretty neat imagery.

      I like it.

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