DV-Tan concept v1

[slayer]

Well, I've had this idea for a long time but never got around to making it. This first concept didn't really turn out the way I wanted it, but it's a start. The shirt wasn't as flashy as I wanted it. It's supposed to cut off short, like right under the breasts, and show some clevage, but not too much clevage. Then the sleeves are supposed to be like baggy pajama sleeves that go past her hands and have a wide opening, but I didn't draw that. The cresent moon head band turned out ok, but I really have to work on making cresent moons. I think I did a fine job on the putting on the stars and moons on her shirt though. Sometime I'll make a full body picture of her. I can imagine her with long light blue-ish hair, wearing that flashy pajama shirt, and maybe some short shorts or a DV thong I wanted something that looks sexy, but something that would also feel comfortable when wearing to bed.

[Man of Steel]

Hey, that looks great, slayer! Perhaps make her bust a bit fuller, would be my only real criticism.

[slayer]

Lol ok, but I don't want her to have gigantic boobs.

[[SomeGuy]]

Lol ok, but I don't want her to have gigantic boobs. Man card. Turn it in. Jk, I agree...ginormus boobs = fail.

[bobthemonkey]

Not huuuge boobs. But.. some would be good. At the moment I'm not sure that she's not a trap. ><

[slayer]

Colored it

[no-Name]

she looks crosseyed. >.< all you need is practice, and youll be a great artist.

[Jeff777]

Looks great slayer However...isn't it the other way around? Shouldn't the inner part of the eye be black and the outer part be blue?

[Venomblood]

Make the moons blue. That's my advice.

[Kushna Mufeed]

Yeah, the stars and moons should be a different colour.

[slayer]

Ok lol, I'm not really good at coloring I forgot to draw the stars and moons on this one, but it's pretty good if you ask me.

[no-Name]

cool! this is your best yet in my opinion. the breasts are still a bit weird, but i can already see improvment! very nice.

[Tyler]

Man card. Turn it in. lol scrubs

[slayer]

She doesn't look too slutty does she? I wanted to have some comfortable clothes, but also something that would be worn to bed.

[Amethyst Star]

the breasts are still a bit weird, but i can already see improvment! They're okay if you're going for a bra-less look (and she is going to bed...) Personally, the shorts would be up just a little higher. They just look like they're going to fall off of her. Also, keep in mind that sleepwear is usually looser and less crisp, so a more floppy collar would be fine. Thirdly, did you intend for her to be wearing an under-shirt? Just wondering. Lastly, the left side of face where the jaw is seems to be just a tiny bit too angular, but I'm splitting hairs now Overall, that looks good! (And I want a pair of DV star/moon pijamas!)

[slayer]

They're okay if you're going for a bra-less look (and she is going to bed...) Personally, the shorts would be up just a little higher. They just look like they're going to fall off of her. Also, keep in mind that sleepwear is usually looser and less crisp, so a more floppy collar would be fine. Thirdly, did you intend for her to be wearing an under-shirt? Just wondering. Lastly, the left side of face where the jaw is seems to be just a tiny bit too angular, but I'm splitting hairs now Overall, that looks good! (And I want a pair of DV star/moon pijamas!) Thanks! I tried to make the shirt baggy or whatever without making it look like crap, but it looks good for now. Ah, it does look like an undershirt, but no, it's supposed to be her clavicles. I can never get them to look right I probably should have spaced them out a little so it doesn't look like a shirt.