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    1. 03-10-2009 02:35 AM #1
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      Go slower, you wrote in 3 pages of Pages document in what I would put in 30.
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    2. 03-10-2009 08:59 AM #2
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      Quote Originally Posted by ninja9578 View Post
      Go slower, you wrote in 3 pages of Pages document in what I would put in 30.
      I try not to drag it out too much lol. There's alot of stuff i want to do with the storyline : D
      Empty your mind, be formless. Shapeless, like water. If you put water into a cup, it becomes the cup. You put water into a bottle and it becomes the bottle. You put it in a teapot it becomes the teapot. Now, water can flow or it can crash. Be water my friend.
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    3. 03-25-2009 03:36 AM #3
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      could use a little practice, but it was very entertaining nonetheless. Keep working at it, you seem to have some potential there

      I didn't have time to read it all the way through, but I'll get back to it.
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    4. 04-01-2009 09:25 PM #4
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      Too much dialogue.

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