broken wings

[death dreamer]

my wings are broken help me find the pieces i can not fly let me fly once more help me find the pieces show me endless skys let me fly once more help me soar show me endless skys fly me into the sun set help me soar let me touch each star let me touch each star i can not fly fly me into the sun set my wings are broken

[Rakkantekimusouka]

Wow...it sounds sort of like a sestina, was that what you were aiming for? Anyway, I can really feel the passion, the sadness...no BS! :bravo: