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      Post your freestyle or raps

      Title says it all, so post anything you've created yourself, whatever quality/topic/length.

      It doesn't matter if you've never tried before, or if you've never listened to any type of rap/hip-hop/freestyling. In fact, that could be a good thing, since you'd be creating your own style, uninfluenced by other styles of rap. Use it to convey your thoughts, tell a story, explore a concept, etc. anything you like.



      So here is my contribution which I just made up in the last hour. I wanted to try something new out, so it's different to my other shit:

      I smoked a fat sack and kicked back to relax
      but with no snacks I had to follow your tracks, carrying an axe
      that I bought from the store, cos weed has no tax
      Was hacking at your door, when my mind sidetracks

      I saw a cop car, it wasn't too far
      Knocked on his window, asked for a gun and some ammo
      He examined me from head to toe, shrugs
      proceeded to say I should forgo drugs
      Thinking this is wise, but hating what it implies
      I prepare to outwit the devil in disguise

      I admit that I don't have a crime to commit
      but it has adverse effects, and now he suspects
      So then I feign submission, eradicate the suspicion
      halt radio transmission, to limit the opposition

      He told me to leave, or a penalty I'd receive
      But I'm too busy thinking of what I can achieve
      With faulty cognition, I reach for his keys in the ignition
      though I fail my mission, and so then make him a proposition
      in acquisition of spells from a metabolic magician
      for permission to continue on this drug fueled expedition

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      ima six foot three 200 and 10 lbp, silverback grrrilla thumpn' my chest deep from the south

      1 bar and i'm out, nannar to the dome bytchez!

      also, HERE is a site that is kind of slow, but if you dig deep enough you will find some really good poetry.
      Last edited by greenhavoc; 04-04-2011 at 03:03 PM. Reason: forgot the damn link ...derp!

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