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    1. 02-05-2010 03:04 PM #1
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      A nightmare - experimental student arthouse film

      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t-FVHXycRPg

      Goes for 3 minutes, so it's short

      I need some feedback on this experimental student arthouse style film, it's called "Blackrust" it's basically a visual explosion of randomness, a bit like the ring videotape, but different.

      It ends with a suicide sequence. Everything is original and done by only me (except for the actor in the bath-tub and the guy who broke his thumb)

      I won at a film competition and it singlehandedly got me into filmschool, but I'd still love some feedback from you guys
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      Wow... absolutely badass!!!

      To be honest though, the only part I didn't like was the suicide in the bathtub part... it killed the effect. Because it goes from abstract to narrative, and the pacing slowed too much. Maybe if the shots on the guy didn't hold so long, or if there was no color... or a different actor... something. But aside from that,
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    3. 02-05-2010 03:24 PM #3
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      I know the change of mood is drastic, and in a sense that was kind of what I was wanting in the first place, it's funny because that was the bit most of my friends liked, but some people didn't like it so it was mix-mix so i left it in anyway, lol.
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    4. 02-06-2010 07:53 PM #4
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      I agree with Darkmatters-- other than the bathtub scene, the whole thing was just awesome splendid job
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