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      PUZZLE OF A CLOUDED FACE

      If you guys could read what Iíve written and comment upon it I would greatly appreciate it

      PUZZLE OF A CLOUDED FACE

      When war is all I see and all I seek is peace,
      Mist swathes my spirit with query.
      While internal war is all I see and all I seek is internal peace,
      Mist covers my soul with disguise.

      My hand becomes clouded by a fountain of fear,
      as the stream slowly fills my fingers with hate.

      My fingers becomes clouded by a splash of anger,
      as the rain gradually fills my fist with suffering.

      My fist becomes clouded by a river of rage,
      as the sea progressively fills my body with pain.

      My body becomes clouded by a drizzle of hurt,
      as the ocean quickly fills my head with fear.

      Since I see inside my eyes the internal war,
      peace is all I desire.

      When dreaming of harmony is all I do,
      does that mean anything or nothing to you?

      When peace is all I see and peace is all I seek,
      light will sheathe my spirit in wonder.
      "I was looking back to see if you were looking back at me to see me looking back at you".



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      cool writing. I had to read it twice. Seems like you got a fire inside that you need to put out. good work.


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      Cheers for the comment, greatly appriciated

      I did write it when i was in Personal Turmoil due to this girl, so its emotional intensity prob does seem to be alittle angry (lol)

      (Nice clock pic btw- its a cool reality check while on the board)
      "I was looking back to see if you were looking back at me to see me looking back at you".



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