That's a pretty cool method Jigsaw.

There's just one thing - your subconscious doesn't process negative suggestions. So when you tell yourself "don't forget to know you're dreaming," your subconscious only hears "forget to know you're dreaming."

A classic example of why not to phrase suggestions in the negative:

WHATEVER YOU DO, DO NOT THINK ABOUT A PINK ELEPHANT!!!

Now did that sentence make you not think about a pink elephant?

So just a quick tip: Hypnotic suggestion should always be done in positive format like- "I remember to notice when I am dreaming."

Otherwise I think your method sounds great.