Thread: Does this counts as a lucid dream?

I'm too lazy to write it again so here is the quote from my dream journal:

Originally posted by baronbrocoli
All right here's the deal.
09/05:
Become Lucid damn it!

about three dreams remenbered but I didn't manage to get lucid. I'm too lazy to recall them the proper way so there are some details missing. This was a dream I had before doing a WBTB at 6:00

All rigth, I walk into some kind of cyber-cafe. There is this computer desk occupied by my brother, Fernando. Besides himself and I there is no one else in the cafe. I approach him and see that he is surfing DV's forum. At this point I realize that HE is dreaming. So I tell him "Man, you are dreaming" He looks at me with a strange face. I say" realize you are dreaming and you'll be able to do anything". I think here he realizes he is dreaming so we get out of the cafe.

We come out to some kind of park. I can see some mountains and behind the tallest one I can see a giant brain floating on the sky like a zeppelin. Something tells me that I need to go to the brain to be able to become lucid. So my brother and I start to walk towards some stairs to leave the park. My smaller brother, Pablo, walks into us and follows us. *

As we walk up the stairs, I manage to see some kind of soccer field on the left. It has no grass but it is more like dirt and the goals are made of white tubes with no net to stop the ball. To the right, I can see some type of building which i'm not interested in. As we get to the top of the stairs, there is a school bus waiting for us. I climb in first and wake up because of the actual sound of a bus stopping near my house.

Damn it I told my brother to become lucid because he was in a dream but I failed to recognize that I was in one too. And that giant brain was such an obvious dreamsign... well anyway it will come because I have been in a dry spell for some months now.

Probably it doesn't count but it's just whishful thinking Please tell me if it counts lol