Thread: Self Confidence

just a bit of advice
spell check your site

your / you're
its / it's
etc.

also.......
I'd re-write the front page, to be honest
you've got to make it sound far more "professional"

first off most people with half a brain can or will see through your little act if your not being yourself[/b]

Now, I'm no pop psychologist
but I do know a site about building confidence probably shouldn't accuse it's readers of playing "little acts"
it just doesn't convey the right message

This site's going out to young & old alike
so has to read correctly across the ages

Think of a spotty 15 year old who can't get a girlfriend, and draft the site according to him
Then think of a divorced 40-somethings guy who hasn't dated in 20 years, and re-draft the site according to both of them

and as for thinking you're a multi-millionaire and not concerning yourself with the lowly masses......


*edit*
a few people have posted their sites before wanting comments, and have gone away nearly crying cause of some harsh comments made
so, this is a good test of your techniques......
Can you survive the unstoppable barrage of comments below?

I'm sure it's intermittent, but your site is currently not even working for me.

I hope you are confident about your grammar.