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Recently, I started an art project and I decided to include poetry as poetry is art in written form...one of my passions...my art topic was Death and Destruction...tell me what you think about this piece of poetry...honest answers only please |
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"all animals except man know that the ultimate of life is to enjoy it!"
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Brothers & Sisters in Dreams
To b honest the message your trying t oget acorss regarding philosiphy or whatever, thats your business |
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"...You want to reclaim your mind and get it out of the hands of the cultural engineers who want to turn you into a half-baked moron consuming all this trash that's being manufactured out of the bones of a dying world..." - Terence McKenna
Previously known as imran_p
"all animals except man know that the ultimate of life is to enjoy it!"
I'm a little lost by the poem. You heap negative images on the reader, and finish on a hopeful note that comes out of nowhere. The disconnection is to wide for me to draw a profound message from your efforts. Perhaps if you worked to create a smoother transition between moods, people of my tastes would be able to enjoy your poetry more. |
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