dakotahnoks DEILD tutorial

**zebrah** · 01-16-2011 05:54 AM

Even after all of Percy's edits this is still poorly written. Please proof read what you write.

**PercyLucid** · 01-16-2011 05:49 PM

Yeah, I have the same feeling. I almost erased this completely as I was not looking forward to re-word the entire thing. I just did not want to throw to waste all of his efforts, so I tried to leave as much of his writing as possible

But yeah, you definitely need to proofread before you send a user's guide. In addition, you need to send more accurate information. I removed a lot of information that was not accurate.

**Julie** · 01-17-2011 03:32 AM

Originally Posted by Zebrah

Even after all of Percy's edits this is still poorly written. Please proof read what you write.

I read the original version... imo, it's the edits that make it confusing...

**PercyLucid** · 01-17-2011 06:36 PM

No, it does not, trust me

The information was not proper and accurate so I had to remove some.

**zebrah** · 01-17-2011 08:23 PM

Yeah I read it before as well it didn't make any sense at all.

**Puffin** · 01-17-2011 08:25 PM

Good tutorial; you might want to add something about the possibility of missing an FA if you try DEILDing straight from a LD (you don't get up when you "wake up" which can make you miss the dream!)

**Julie** · 01-18-2011 02:52 AM

Originally Posted by PercyLucid

No, it does not, trust me

The information was not proper and accurate so I had to remove some.

Well, it may be less confusing to you, that's fine, I'm just saying that I, personally, find it more confusing.

Of course no one ever said my mind works normally.

**dakotahnok** · 03-30-2011 01:31 AM

I have rewritten the tutorial and zebrah is fixing the errors I made from there. Hopefully this is much easier to read than the other version.

Thanks zebrah!!