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      Member irishcream's Avatar
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      Poem: Hopelessness

      Hopelessness

      I wish this pain would
      Stop, the feeling of
      Powerlessness threatens
      To tip me over the edge.

      I see your face, hear
      Your voice, see your
      Smile
      And I know itís worth it.

      I want someone to hold
      Me tight, tell me its okay,
      That itís alright to cry,
      And be angry.

      I know you understand,
      And thatís the greatest
      Comfort of all,
      To have you by my side.

      this one's important to me.
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'

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      Being alone is defintly a feeling of hopelessness. I felt some sadness in your writing. I like to read poems were you can feel the emotion coming out of it. keep up the good work. and don't stop posting your writings.


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      Thanks for your comments!!
      I'm glad you liked it, although it's important to me, i don't think it's one of my better ones.
      I think i rushed it, i came home one night and just threw it down on paper.
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'

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