So, I wrote this spur of the moment a few months back while I was sitting on my porch. The first line just came to me after a series of thoughts about the world ran through my head. It's the first poem I've written where I still feel what I wrote and how I felt at the time. It means something to me and I just wanted to see what you guys thought about it before I try to send it off. Any kind of feedback would be nice, talk all the sh^t you want, lol. Thanks in advance. |
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