Hello !
This is my first story that I wrote in english. I hope it doesn't have any gramatical errors, but I asked a couple of my friends to proofread it and it seems to be okay.
I decided to share it with DV community to see if it the story is any good, and hopefully receive some honest tips to improve my writing.



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I was inspired by this video in case you're wondering:
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