Thread: When Passion Takes Over

When Passion Takes Over

Pt I

Slanted vision disorder,
The perfect crime of lust,
Desired everything to gain,
But lost all there was to loose,
How luck can kill the dream,
Your dream.
Hold on, never let go.



Pt II

The victimized clouded memory,
Fading fast with no explanation,
Bare no excuses,
Harbour no thoughts,
All feelings are lost,
Emotions fraught,
You let go.

I've given in to lust even when I knew the consequences of it. Your writing is very enigmatic, you don't use many words. Maybe I should adopt this style a bit.