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    1. 11-25-2005 11:20 PM #1
      Vandrosdis
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      The One That Got Inside

      The One That Got Inside

      She rips through me with bullets of desire,
      She grips me, holds me tight,
      Holds me close with sharpened fingers,
      Like knives.
      The bullets hurt,
      And the knives dig deep, to the bone.
      Is this how she treats people?
      Or does she just hate me?
      I valued her,
      I trusted her,
      I loved her.
      But I didn’t think she would kill me.
      Broken shards of a shattered dream,
      Thrown against the wall of time,
      We all end up in pieces.
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    2. 11-29-2005 10:04 AM #2
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      I love poetry, man, I read this about 2 or 3 times, and I have a general idea.

      You are talking about the one who managed to get deep inside your life and manage to hurt you? I felt something click inside me while reading, I have a similar exp.
      naturals are what we call people who did all the right things accidentally
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