Poem I wrote.

**Gwendolyn** · 05-08-2004 04:39 AM

ou'll rupture the soul with words (I am told),
You'll surely scare them away!
For the depths of your heart will tear them apart,
If you let such words fly,
With every message you try to make.
But those depths(I replied),
Are the portal to the maddening end of days;
So if (I implied),

This is called the poet's discussion. Am I a worthy poet yet? I am 16, and have been reading and writing my whole life.

The poet's discussion

They would want to survive,
They would happily go on their way.
(He says) Frequent fearlessness,
And the moral Renaissance has surely taken your view!
Be not afrighted-
More like delighted-that such things have a'stolen your heart anew!
And if (He inquired),
You keep all this up,
You'll capture their mind's eye-and revive
The curiousness in those poor lonely souls
(Truly Inspired) Their hearts will surely thrive
Poetry,(he hath said to me),is the beauty of the human race-
Romance and ridicule,
Fire and water.
We inhale, and live, and in our very souls embrace!

**Gwendolyn** · 05-08-2004 04:41 AM

Crap...i messed that poem all up....Here it is really

You'll rupture the soul with words (I am told),
You'll surely scare them away!
For the depths of your heart will tear them apart,
If you let such words fly,
With every message you try to make.
But those depths(I replied),
Are the portal to the maddening end of days;
So if (I implied),
They would want to survive,
They would happily go on their way.
(He says) Frequent fearlessness,
And the moral Renaissance has surely taken your view!
Be not afrighted-
More like delighted-that such things have a'stolen your heart anew!
And if (He inquired),
You keep all this up,
You'll capture their mind's eye-and revive
The curiousness in those poor lonely souls
(Truly Inspired) Their hearts will surely thrive
Poetry,(he hath said to me),is the beauty of the human race-
Romance and ridicule,
Fire and water.
We inhale, and live, and in our very souls embrace!