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      Bio-Turing Machine O'nus's Avatar
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      My Once Solemn Path is Paved With Your Gentle Heart

      My Once Solemn Path is Paved With Your Gentle Heart

      For years I walked along the solemn shoulder of the roads
      Burdened souls in tainted cars endlessly passing me by
      As I travelled naked on the mock filled gravel
      Carrying a backpack full of trivialities and heart-ache
      Under a smeared gray sky
      And a sun too far away
      As doubt and pessimism consumed my mind
      You came to me; muse of providence and hope
      And you chose to walk the path with me
      Hand in hand, kindered hearts
      Your smile lights my sky with stars
      The sun is closer now, along with a celestial sky
      With the beauteous influence of your soul


      ~ To my gem ~

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      Very nice, not so morbid as the ones I too often produce, and better for it.

      Pardon my insolence if I am incorrect but did you mean 'kindred' instead of 'kindered'?

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      What a delicious beating! Lomebririon's Avatar
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      Neat.

      Nice name too.
      The best times of your life should not be when you're still so young, or else you'll live a life always dreaming of the past.


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