Thread: InTruedHer- another Tornado step-by-step

Yah, I think you're right about the shoulder. It's not necessarily bulky, like a guys, but it might be a bit too pointy. The figure is leaning on that arm a bit, so the shoulder should be pointing upward a bit - instead I got it mostly pointing outward, making it look more defined. I wonder if I soften the edge just a bit if it would help.

The clavicle is a bit too defined as well - but again, if she's applying pressure to that spot...

I think the shoulder is in proportion, but you're right, the clavicle is too prominent. If she was like really skinny it might stick out that much, but the rest of her is well-built, so I think it's a little too noticable.

Actually to me it looks to be the opposite. The clavicle looks about right since the weight on that arm is drawing it up and making it look unnaturally pronounced but it seems like the shoulder is set just a little too far our. I guess though, if we can't come to a consensus on what exactly is wrong with it, it must be so minor a flaw that most people wouldn't notice it at all.

Whoah nice. Cool pics. You are very talented So how is the hair coming along?