Thread: The Random Ramblings of a Madman

I don't draw or animate or do any of the other cool things you people can do. Instead I write. Since one of my new year's resolutions is to write one hour a day, I'll probably have a lot more writings produced. Since I have I'll have more writings produced, I want people to read and criticize them in hopes of bettering myself at writing.

This is one of the more intellectual online communities I've come across (I really mean that) so you have been privelidged to read the random things I scrawl on paper. Most of the things I write are about or based in a fantasy world I have been developing for quite some time.

First up, I have a screenplay for a short film I had to write for Writer's Craft. As some of you know, I had to write a 10 page screenplay and was having trouble coming up with an idea. Some you wonderful people in chat (names escape me) came up with some really original ideas () when I consulted you. Sure enough, my imagination didn't fail me and planted an idea in my head. While I didn't use any of your ideas, I greatly appreciate your willingness to help. It is due tomorrow, so your criticisms aren't going to help me get a better mark, but they're welcome nonetheless.

So here it is: Beware Your Greed (It's a PDF so make sure you have Adobe Acrobat Reader)