Thread: [Hentai] Attempt at GooGirl

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I can't access the hentai.

Possible to spoiler it here?

I'd love to see it and i might be able to give some pointers

Aye, don't use ImageShack, 'tis evil. When the very hosting site takes an age and a half to load, you know the hosting it provides isn't going to be very reliable.

So bump this thread when you upload it somewhere it'll open.
Like xs.to perhaps. It's what I use.

Did you use the Smudge Tool on her by any chance?

Originally Posted by Ynot

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Well done, sir.

Ah, well, now that it's loading...I'll speak frankly, if you don't mind.

I don't like it. It may just be me of course. I don't like anything that doesn't look perfect. Perfected creative writing with flowing speech and a wide vocabulary...perfected drawing with fitting colours, good shading, well-made sketches...and so on.

That's probably why I don't draw myself even though I can...it takes ages. To create an anime drawing that looks like anime characters from cartoons and professional art takes a long time. Sketching takes quite a while, the colouring and shading is a whole process of its own...

But in the end, is there really a point in drawing something that doesn't look good? That doesn't look great? After all, art is for the eyes to enjoy, is it not?

Just thoughts out loud though. I doubt my criticism can be held too highly considering that I'm too lazy to draw myself.

It's quite plain, but i think it's pretty good.

Seeing as you're doing..urm..."googirls", i'm guessing you'd be going for a more cartoony kawaii look, rather than a more realistic look.

For this picture, i'd suggest redoing the body and making the back less "wobbly".

The face is good though ^^, innocent, anxious and kawaii.

Originally Posted by Marvo

I was browsing some hentai the other day, and stumbled upon something called Goo Girls. While these.. things, are kinda weird, they are really beautyfull (and to quote Quagmire "I find that strangely arrousing").


These drawings also seems, sadly, very rare, but I attempted to make one anyway, by tracing some normal hentai with new outlines, transparency, a lot of new part (because of transparency), a silly background and some giant hooters.

Here's what I got out of it;

Goo Girl[NSFW]

What I would like now, is maybe some pointers and thoughts. I suppose maybe Slayer can aid me?

Internet.

Originally Posted by Ynot

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Rofl

Originally Posted by Jdeadevil

Did you use the Smudge Tool on her by any chance?

Yea, I used it to creat the gooie look and the droplets from her hair. It's not the right way to do it though.

Originally Posted by Merlock

Ah, well, now that it's loading...I'll speak frankly, if you don't mind.

I don't like it. It may just be me of course. I don't like anything that doesn't look perfect. Perfected creative writing with flowing speech and a wide vocabulary...perfected drawing with fitting colours, good shading, well-made sketches...and so on.

That's probably why I don't draw myself even though I can...it takes ages. To create an anime drawing that looks like anime characters from cartoons and professional art takes a long time. Sketching takes quite a while, the colouring and shading is a whole process of its own...

But in the end, is there really a point in drawing something that doesn't look good? That doesn't look great? After all, art is for the eyes to enjoy, is it not?

Just thoughts out loud though. I doubt my criticism can be held too highly considering that I'm too lazy to draw myself.

I certainly see your point. It's not funny to draw, when all your drawings end out stupid ugly. This one isn't too ugly, though it can certainly be better, with better lines, better 'transparency perspectives', and a better background.
Your comment is not of much help to me though

Originally Posted by ClouD

It's quite plain, but i think it's pretty good.

Seeing as you're doing..urm..."googirls", i'm guessing you'd be going for a more cartoony kawaii look, rather than a more realistic look.

For this picture, i'd suggest redoing the body and making the back less "wobbly".

The face is good though ^^, innocent, anxious and kawaii.

I can only agree with all this. I did the tracing pretty close-up, so it often turned out a bit wobbly

Care to explain what exactly kawaii is?


By the way, here's what a 'real' goo girl should look like. Without the human of course.

Goo Girl[NSFW]

Well, I can't be of much help unless I were to post an entire tutorial within my thread.
There are plenty of sites around that teach how to draw anime.

Like this one.

So if you do agree that it's best to aim directly at the best possible result, then that's where to start, I imagine.

I can't say I'm going for perfection, Merlock. Just relatively good drawing

Hmmm isn't Hentai pretty much cartoon porn? I think it's a really fine line between "art" and porn, I can't say I particularly agree with linking to this sort of thing. I'll get back to you on that...

Who the hell wants to see some cartoon chick's snatch or getting her boob grabbed?

If you're free to do this I'm going to start submitting drawings of nude guys in questionable situations as well.

Certainly. Hentai can also be used as entertainment (some of it is weird and funny as hell ), and art of course, since it can certainly be pretty. There is no line, since hentai can serve all the purposes at once. It depends on what the individual uses it for.

edit: by the way, I realize that I'm in quite a gray area (or what it's called) posting this kind of stuff, and asking for pointers and help, but I didn't feel like registering at some hentai forum, since I knew we already have some experienced anime drawing in here.

Originally Posted by Ynot

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You know what that feels like don't you

Originally Posted by Aquanina

Hmmm isn't Hentai pretty much cartoon porn? I think it's a really fine line between "art" and porn, I can't say I particularly agree with linking to this sort of thing. I'll get back to you on that...

Yes, Hentai is pretty much cartoon porn. Although I was doing research for my new book (that's a Naruto joke), I did see that not all Hentai was Porn. Some of it was just anime boys and girls kissing. Some of it was just some fan made fake videos.

Example of the fan made fakes

This boy and this girl was walking down the street, they are chatting about something (I kind of forgot). And then you hear the sound of a pole hitting something, and then the girl grabbes her ass going "Ahh!!" and so she falls to the floor and starts crying.

Although that's how I saw it anyway. And no I don't watch Hentai, as I was confused on what it actually was myself.

Originally Posted by Marvo

Certainly. Hentai can also be used as entertainment (some of it is weird and funny as hell ), and art of course, since it can certainly be pretty. There is no line, since hentai can serve all the purposes at once. It depends on what the individual uses it for.

edit: by the way, I realize that I'm in quite a gray area (or what it's called) posting this kind of stuff, and asking for pointers and help, but I didn't feel like registering at some hentai forum, since I knew we already have some experienced anime drawing in here.

This guy hit the nail on the head!

Ah yes...I've seen some stuff like this before. Sometimes it can get kinda weird though. I always thought that they were water or something.

And to comment the picture in Post 10 but Marvo, it is a nice peice of work. I just don't like it when people always reject hentai and make fun of it...I mean, yeah, there are some things out there that should have never been made (Like that goregraphy crap or whatever) or some that could use lots of work.

Edit: I for one am alright with Hentai...but I'm not going to go around spamming it on the forums ><
But I'm gonna guess that the admins will let you post some stuff if its for art...

Yeah, maybe put a (small) bikini on her next time Marvo

Jdea, why has your writing gone red and green?

Actually, I was just hoping for pointers. The tutorial Merlock gave is very useful, and I've learned a great deal about drawing eyes now.

Slayer, if you didn't get to see the first picture, I can send it to you.

Originally Posted by Marvo

What I would like now, is maybe some pointers and thoughts. I suppose maybe Slayer can aid me?

I didn't see that last time I looked! IM POPULAR!

Originally Posted by Lord Toaster

Yeah, maybe put a (small) bikini on her next time Marvo

Jdea, why has your writing gone red and green?

Looks cool.

Originally Posted by Jdeadevil

Looks cool.

You are about two weeks too late.

Originally Posted by Lord Toaster

Yeah, maybe put a (small) bikini on her next time Marvo

Yeah; leave the open vagoo for all to see; it's far less offensive.

Originally Posted by Carôusoul

Yeah; leave the open vagoo for all to see; it's far less offensive.

I, for one, do not have a problem with it. I do think that sometimes girls can be hotter with clothes on, but in this case she is a googirl, so it would only make sence that she doesn't have clothes, or they would probably just go right through her.