Can I get a response on this? Criticisms, questions, suggestions, etc. |
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ALERT!!! Wanna get to the point? Skip to the Times New Roman. Lemme know what you think. |
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Can I get a response on this? Criticisms, questions, suggestions, etc. |
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It's interesting... Is the king a bastard or a decent guy? |
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Well, he adheres to cultural values strictly. He is also a man who has suffered through much turmoil, more than most. The King is a great wolf (Anthropomorphic animals) who has many great accomplishments to his name. |
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Yeah, but those need changes made to them. |
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Son of a bitch, Kushna... I really need you to publish this so that I can roleplay it. |
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In time. I expect Segrival to be one of the biggest things I do in life. I don't want to rush anything. That, and University. This place just sucks out your soul. |
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Yeah... You could easily format this for a pnp rp once you've written some novels about it, though. |
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Not denying it. I was just saying that it could also be epic as an rp. Honestly, after reading practically the whole web page, I'm really intigued and enthralled. |
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I will probably end up doing that at some point. |
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Wow its a great plot. I would buy it |
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I have some experience in writing fantasy, and one thing I'll tell you is that what you have given us isn't even enough to write half a book in my opinion. Usually the summary of important events in a book will be pages and pages long, and you really don't want to over do it, but you still want it to be intact and interesting or relevant to the rest of the story (believable) and you're plan for you're story is really dull and even creative filler (that is more spontaneous writing) could not save this story, but then again I cannot judge what I have not seen yet, but I will tell you this: The more you write down before hand, the less trouble you will have falling of a cliff (which happens to me every time I go off script). |
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RP here maybe? |
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Of course not. What incentive would you have to read it then? This is not a plot summary for a novel. It's a prologue summary for a novel. |
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Its good to here how devoted you are to you're writings, I wish I could say the same in some regards. |
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Actually, I've been thinking of going underground with Segrival for a while. Time to hide it away from public eye and its influences. |
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okay, but as an artist, I'm going to have to ask you a question I hope you can get back to me after thinking about it for a while: |
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Tolkien is my first and foremost influence. A few other books and videogames. I am trying to weed out as much external influence from other works of fiction, though. I'm striving towards originality when it comes to Segrival itself if not the stories set in it. |
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I wouldn't say my dreams directly influence my work. |
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okay...thats cool. |
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I did try to respond to respond to everything you said, except for that run-on sentence because I couldn't tell where you were trying to get with it and was too tired at the time to try and comprehend it. |
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I'm just going to throw this in here. |
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