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      Jimmy 2.0(feedback welcome)

      Jimmy 2.0 was angry. His mother would not let him have a machine gun. No matter how he asked his mother said "No". So what does an 11 year old boy want with such a weapon? The answer was simple enough. He wanted to shoot sombody. But who?

      Jimmy 2.0's mom always told him never to trust anyone. So naturaly, he didn't trust her or anybody else for that matter. Jimmy 2.0's mom also taught him to be vengefull. "Forgiveness is for suckers!" she would say. Despite this, Jimmy2.0's older brother, Jimmy 1.0, was very forgiving. But the whole family forgave him for his shortcomings. After all, he was an outdated and almost completely obsolete member of the family. On Jimmy 2.0's 5th birthday, his mother sold all $50,000 of love invested in Jimmy 1.0, and bought shares in Jimmy 2.0 instead. And it turned out to be a great investment. Jimmy 2.0 was as cold and heartless as any parent could ever hope.

      As for Jimmy 1.0, he just grew worse and worse. He'd speak of such primitive ideas like "love", "spirituality", and "purpose". So, naturally he was heavily drugged in hopes that he was salvagable. But eventually his growing insanity got the better of him, and one day he started to cry! So they cut thier losses and sold his meat to McRonalds resteraunt for $17, which was good timing because McRonalds had thier "17 sticks of meat for 17$" deal, going that week.

      After eating a few sticks of meat, Jimmy 2.0 went to his room angrily. He still wanted a machine gun and, that night, decided he would get one, with or without his mothers permission. So, the next morning he took his moms credit card and bought a machine gun from the school vending machine. And when he got home, before his mom could even ask about the gun in his hands, he shot her. One hundred times in one second. Needless to say, the Federal Department of Nosiness showed up showed up and took Jimmy 2.0 away. He was put on trial, by a supercomputer, to determine if his actions were neccisary. So he told the computer about how he wanted a gun, so he could shoot his mom, for not letting him have a gun, which he wanted so he could shoot his mom, for not letting him have a gun, which he wanted so.....

      So the computer determined that his actions were completely logical and let him go free. The main reason for these trials was to determine if the defendant was sane, which Jimmy 2.0 clearly was. What Jimmy 2.0 did was cold and heartless. His mother would be proud.
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      Reminds me, ever, ever so suspciously of the Boyfriend + Girlfriend stories. You never got the idea from there now did you?

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      Well, now that you've told me what the "Girlfriend and Boyfriend" story is, I see a vague connection, but there was definately not any influence from that, considering I worte this in february, and read the story you're talking about I read afer posting this.

      Can you see the message in all of this Jimmy 2.0 nonsense?
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      This must be one of the most beautifull, ingenious poems.... I've ever had the honor of reading....

      If only there were more of such desensitized,uncencored,psychoticly ingenious art... this world would be a better place....

      simply magnificent!....
      I must have more... keep it comin!

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      If only there were more of such desensitized,uncencored,psychoticly ingenious art... this world would be a better place.... [/b]
      I didn't know anyone else had the same values as me!
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      Originally posted by insanejester
      This must be one of the most beautifull, ingenious poems.... I've ever had the honor of reading....

      If only there were more of such desensitized,uncencored,psychoticly ingenious art... this world would be a better place....

      simply magnificent!....
      I must have more... keep it comin!
      ^^werd
      In this crazy world if they don't consider you mad, then you have no confirmation of your own sanity, do you?
      Imagine if this crazy world thought you were sane?! Oh my God, worst nightmare!
      -David Icke

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