Screaming Inside

[death dreamer]

Tears fall down my face as I lie here on my bed Wishing I were in another place almost wishing I were dead No one bothers to look deep enough to see the hurt within Everyday seems to be so rough my life is an undeniable sin Acceptance is what I long for but that is merely a dream This pain comes from within my core and I'm not who I seem I try to hide who I am inside I can't let my guard down And no matter how I'd tried and tried I cannot ever change this frown Open your eyes and look at me listen to my cries I need your help - can't you see? it's written in my eyes

[Death-Wuad]

Nice, although I'm getting a bit tired of reading depressing poetry

[gameover]

Scribler said "no one likes a morbid bastard" But it was good.

[death dreamer]

thanks... i think

[insanejester]

I get what there sayin, its not a bad poem, its just to predictable, its like you can guess every other line before you hear it..... ssdd...